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Location: Centennial, Colorado, United States

Tuesday, June 05, 2007

One or Two

Glass doors painted white
I turned just for a minute
but I saw them go inside
and walking down the narrow hall

Senoritas in the doorway
insinuating themselves between the dancers on the floor
floodlight revelry
someone claps and cries for more

But the band is on break
and the music on the radio is just not loud enough
and so they took her back and tried to speak in Spanish for a while
the fly-bitten truck pulled up outside

I looked for a cowboy or two
but found only pretending
farm boys dressed in slacks they borrowed for only
an hour or two

The door painted yellow on the inside
was glass
and it shattered in one shard or two
into the street.

2 Comments:

Anonymous Anonymous said...

Hey Read!

I'm only about halfway through the Subterraneans but so far I find it both really interesting and really frustrating. It's written in a style which is much more poetic and stream-of-consciousness (its so "beat"!) than any other of Kerouac's works that I've come across, and it makes for great reading if you can get into the style. It's almost like you have to read it really fast so you can still remember the beginning of the sentence by the time you get to the end.

If you're really into beat writing I would definately suggest reading it...I'm not sure if I could say I liked the book or not yet, but so far its kept my interest so I'll try to stick with it to the end.

Hope you're enjoying your summer! Montana is a very nice place, I hear.

Adios

1:12 PM  
Blogger Lary Kleeman said...

I really like "floodlight revelry".

11:43 AM  

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