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Location: Centennial, Colorado, United States

Sunday, August 20, 2006

Two

You’d think it would give me
some kind of kick
she said
misspelled
drinking imported cerveza
gold, light, cold
I’ve grown too used to it anyway
To what?
I said
from the other side
of nowhere
whalebone lamp blocking
my view


And she only stared
never quite there
discussing flamboyant hairdressers
she’d seen in a city
nameless



There’s a man in the corner!
she screamed
the emphasis added later
pointing at the chair left in shadows
seat worn
faded floral embroidery



Yes
I said
my eyes on her eyes
my hands reaching for
her face


And there was Miles Davis
coming out real low
two rhythms wound and unwound

2 Comments:

Blogger Lary Kleeman said...

Hey Read,

Didn't know of your poetry until now. I like it. You've got a real ear and the repeated words and sounds work. Nice line breaks...

"my hands reaching for/her face"...and of course, a great line, "discussing flamboyant hairdressers"...is there any other kind worth discussing?!

Thanks for your comments on my blog. You hit the nail on the head, I try to write out thinking, thoughts...emulating my favorite American poet, the late A.R. Ammons. His long poems and book-length poems are what inspire me. Books such as Garbage and Sphere and Tape for the Turn of the Year.

I really value your opinion and look forward to reading more of your work.

7:54 PM  
Blogger Gabrielle M said...

i like it

10:08 PM  

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